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Chapter 10 done - 46,278



The lovers finally make love for the first time. No wonder I procrastinated 24 hours before writing this chapter. Magic and ritual are potent against psychological barriers. They decided to do it mid chapter before I had any idea what they were leading up to. It worked. Oh wow did it work. I may have to work on the description in the edits, but now I know what happens.

I also think this book has to be in third person omniscient in order to comprehend all of the dialogue -- the cat to cat dialogue, the cat to human dialogue, the telepathy and the characters' thoughts are all important. If it's close third then I'll have to break scenes often to change point of view. That's for the editing process though. For now it's enough that the lovers finally got together.
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